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Post by Ayior on Oct 13, 2010 12:19:18 GMT -6
I have only one short poem thing in english, the rest is german, But i will post it here. WARNING: CREEPY. NO BLOOD OR SUCH, BUT CREEPY. SPOILER BECAUSE OF THAT. BE WARNED. Whalerine
So she stood there in the sea Her facial hair danced with the wind In union with the soft fluff, That surrounded her legs.
Her two eyebrows, United as one; A smile, Which brought the yellow of remains of her teeth To a special retribution.
Her dandruff sparkled, In the glaring Sun Which set her hair tallow ablaze also.
As if she had hippies under her arms, And squirrels in her womb; Proliferated an immense amount of wool, - Called pubic hair - Out of the suture of her clothes.
Her clothes? A white swimsuit; Skin-tight and translucent As if he wants to say: "Push her down the cliff, She has enough natural swimming rings, to survive it."
How much I would have loved to do it that favor. Oh Whalerine.
Thanks for Grammar Correction TigerDreaming from DA.
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Post by HappygirlXD on Nov 29, 2010 20:07:17 GMT -6
O.o Yes. Very creepy...
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Post by Ayior on Dec 1, 2010 5:18:16 GMT -6
thanks
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Post by HappygirlXD on Dec 1, 2010 17:33:13 GMT -6
Lol. You're welcome! xD
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Post by Ayior on Dec 2, 2010 2:00:31 GMT -6
I would have a 11 page story intro which is not creepy for you, but its german...
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Post by HappygirlXD on Dec 3, 2010 21:37:55 GMT -6
Google Translate? IDK.
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Post by Ayior on Dec 7, 2010 8:25:30 GMT -6
Google does now know grammar and its totally weird O.o
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Post by katiebug1 on Dec 12, 2010 15:46:39 GMT -6
Lol I like it and it is creepy.
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