Post by icobbeh on Feb 2, 2015 1:40:15 GMT -6
I love writing storys.. i just hope you guys like them :S
Title: Flicker
By: iCobbeh
Once upon a time in the countries where farmers had there farms and some had just had dogs with huge back yards filled with gardening and flowers, most farms had many animals, but one place just had brownie and her litter of pups, there was a pup named Flicker, He flicked his ears all the time when hes excited. He loved snuggles and loved to play the most, but he was so much smaller then then his siblings, he was so tiny. His coat was mix brown to white color and one ear flops down as one is up. All siblings had name tags on there collar, His mom would pick him up just to get him catch up to his siblings but flicker howl and whine each time his mom pick him up.
Flicker: -howls and whines- im a big pup like my brothers -howls and whines again-
his mother was named brownie cause her coat was the color of chocolate.
Brownie: -puts him down as she leans her muzzle softly on his- I just want you to be able to catch up -she says in the very soft voice-
Flicker mother tone of voice, is so very soft that anyone would be under her spell, well thats what flicker thinks its called.
Flicker: -leans his ear down as both ears flop- why am i so tiny. I want to be HUGE BIG!! BIGGER then anything
Brownie: one day you will be big, Might be bigger then your siblings. Just needs time love, you will see -she smiles softly as her soft eyes look at flicker-
Flicker: -pushes her moms muzzle- mom your trying to put me under a spell -he gets up fast- I will show you mom that i can catch up and you wont have to catch up -his tail curls up highly, as if he was pride and brave-
Brownie: ok love -she giggles softly as she lays down- Im going to take a nap and i want you to play with your siblings.
As brownie falls into a deep nap, flicker runs to his siblings, as he gets closer his older sibling looks at him as he was coming. His name was Brutis, he was the biggest pup from his sisters and brothers. he gots 2 sisters and 2 more brothers. Second born was named Mily, Third born was named Kyle, Forth born was named Kevin and the Fifth born was named Sky. Flicker was born last witch made his siblings think that they were better cuz they were more bigger. Brutis saw Flicker standing there
Flicker: hey guys can I join -wiggles his tail happily
Brutis: -he looks at his sisters and brothers smirking while he looks back at flicker- can you? aren't you a bit small to play with us.
the siblings laugh at poor flicker as they walk away, turns run down his cheeks as he lays down on the floor dosing off. Few hours past as his mom calls her kids
Brownie: BRUTIS, MILY, KYLE, KEVIN, SKY and FLICKER my lovely pups come here -she yelled while standing out side in front of the doggy door as there was a fance that looked like a cage.
the pups came running fast as they can, as flicker was always last to come through the door way as he jumps and trys to go through the door way. But his mom pop her head and pulled flicker out and sets him down beside his siblings
Brownie: today is a hard day for me, but you guys are growing strong and getting big. So its time to let other humans pick you to be with them -she said sadly- im going to miss you all deeply
as the owner to brownie and the pups came outside to put them in the caged fence, brownie had sorrow eyes as some farmer human started to drive in, she looks at the pups as she watchs the farmer pet her pups in the cage as the farmer pets brownie
Farmer: -pets brownies head- there there, I will bring them for a visit sometime
Brownie barked happy as she wiggled her tail trusting the farmers word, she watches him pick up flick, looking at him as he pets him.
Farmer: A bit small, cant have small pup in my farm to do guarding. -pets flicker as he looks at flicker as flickers ears were totally down with sad eyes- sorry -pulling his dog tag reading his name- Flicker. -he puts him back in the fenced cage, as he takes all the siblings, giving the owner money for the pups as he goes in his truck with the pups-
brownie looks at flicker as she rest her head on the grass beside the fenced cage, looking at flicker sadly, the owner sits on the step as people come and go saying he was to small. The day was turning dark and it was now 11pm. The owner sign little as brownie looked at his owner with sad eyes.
Owner: Guess were going to keep flicker. -the owner said to brownie-
Brownie bark happy as she was excited to keep at least one of her pups, she twirls in circle as she looks at the owner. Owner scratches her back as he bends to get flicker. Flicker looked sad that he couldn't get his own owner, flicker was very upset that no one wanted him cuz he was so small. The owner went inside with flicker and with brownie. 3 years as past as season change to summer to fall to winter to spring 3 times over as it was summer. Flicker jump down the huge hill from the back yard as he was huge and his mother was watching him from a distance, he ran tree to tree. Racing his speed and keeping in shape, Cuz he wanted to be stronger then ever, The owner came outside with a bowl of water as flicker heard the sound of his bowl being placed down from a distance, He set back as his owner had a time clock. His owner pressed it while making a sign with his hand flicker ran as fast as he can, Feeling the wind in his fast as he keeps his head low, while his paws move fast in front of him, his tail was sharp from behind him. Keeping balance with the grass, he climbed the steps as he stops at the owner as Flicker pants while the owner takes off the timer.
Owner: 39 seconds, Not bad flicker. Your getting better each time, You did 2 seconds more faster then last time. -owner smiled-
flicker was happy as he was being prised by his owner, wiggling his tail as he jumps up and down at his owner leaving his paws on his owners legs while he jumps. the owner pets his head and went inside, flicker walks up to the bowl while drinking the water, his ears perked up as he hears next door dog barking as flicker's mom brownie goes towards the barking while flicker follows his mother. Brownie walks up to the fence the surrounds the yard as the next door neighbor's dog skip was there, Hes short dog that shakes all the time. Skip was brownie friend from way back when she was a pup.
Brownie: Hey Skip whats going on? -sounding curiously-
Skip: -shaking nervously- have you heard about the bandit dogs?
Brownie: -tilts her head- no.. why?
Skip: -Skip goes closer to the fence, whispering- they been stealing around peoples farm and killing chickens -he shutters- theres been dog catchers all in the farm and alot in this area...
Flicker: -perks one ear up while the other drips down- do you know there names?
Skip: -shakes more scarily- no.. -skip looks more around as he runs inside more nervously-
Flicker had a dumb face on while brownie shakes her head
Flicker: is he always this way?
Brownie: no, he just is different. Everyone is unique and everyone is perfect in there own ways love, but we got to be extra guarded tonight. -she turns to walk in the house- Come lets go inside.
Flicker nods, wondering about the bandits and who they are, Maybe he thought maybe he was meant to be a wild dog but he doesn't want to disappoint his mother or his owner but he keep this in his mind. night fall came..
Flicker: MOM -he yelled while being in the front door- im going out for a run, need to stretch my legs.
Brownie: OK -she replayed loudly back-
Flicker went out side as he owner back in thought, walking around the yard as he goes up the hill, something catches his eyes as he saw eyes in the bushes, his ears perked while he watch them blink then what skip said went through his mind "bandit dogs" the bushes rifle as it was only birds trying to sleep but flew away, Flicker sign in a little bit of disappointment as a voice came from behind him.
Unknown: Thought it was us?
Flicker looked back as he saw 4 dogs and they were all black but one was white and black and one had flop ear, as he turns his body around. the one that spoke had the flop ear, looking at him for a while then spoke..
Flicker: Are you the bandit dogs? -nervously he asked but not scared from the question.-
Bandit1: Yes we are -he said it in a deep tone as if he was growling angry- and who might you be? a police dog?
Flicker: -shakes his head- NO -he said loudly as he stands proudly like a warrior- I am not scared, This is my yard and my territory. No outsiders enter my grounds while im here.
bandits laugh at his brave move thinking its funny.
Bandit1: My name is Cortez -saying it as a bad ass way- This here are Spike -turning his head at the blank one with yellow eyes- Otis -looking at the other black one with yellow and green- and this one is Bruce -looking at the one that is white and black with blue eyes, as Cortez turns around looking at flicker-
Flicker: my name is Flicker -standing the same way-
Cortez: -smirks- you got guts kid -as he thought of something- why don't you join us, You will fit so well. Being owned is so boring with there stupid rules and lock up in cages, where not pets were meant to be wild. Thats why were animals and not humans, think of it this way. They have kids so they shelter them until there an adults, then they move out. But for dogs, we cant go anywhere. what do you say?
Flicker: -started to think a bit as he shakes his head- can i join for one night?
Bruce: -snorts- what are we a trail for you to try, we are like family here -he smiles evilly- we take care of each other and do what we want when we want.
Otis: -Cuts Bruce from talking- Cortez lets just go, Where wasting our time here.
Spike just walks around sniffing the area making sure no one was watching.
Cortez: fellas fellas, He hasn't been wild yet. We all where once like this but me, now we will give you a trail -looking at flicker- what you say? join us for tonight?
Flicker:.....
To Be Continued..
Tell me what you think?
What you expect?
What would you do next?
I will continued but i need feed back on what i have here
Title: Flicker
By: iCobbeh
Once upon a time in the countries where farmers had there farms and some had just had dogs with huge back yards filled with gardening and flowers, most farms had many animals, but one place just had brownie and her litter of pups, there was a pup named Flicker, He flicked his ears all the time when hes excited. He loved snuggles and loved to play the most, but he was so much smaller then then his siblings, he was so tiny. His coat was mix brown to white color and one ear flops down as one is up. All siblings had name tags on there collar, His mom would pick him up just to get him catch up to his siblings but flicker howl and whine each time his mom pick him up.
Flicker: -howls and whines- im a big pup like my brothers -howls and whines again-
his mother was named brownie cause her coat was the color of chocolate.
Brownie: -puts him down as she leans her muzzle softly on his- I just want you to be able to catch up -she says in the very soft voice-
Flicker mother tone of voice, is so very soft that anyone would be under her spell, well thats what flicker thinks its called.
Flicker: -leans his ear down as both ears flop- why am i so tiny. I want to be HUGE BIG!! BIGGER then anything
Brownie: one day you will be big, Might be bigger then your siblings. Just needs time love, you will see -she smiles softly as her soft eyes look at flicker-
Flicker: -pushes her moms muzzle- mom your trying to put me under a spell -he gets up fast- I will show you mom that i can catch up and you wont have to catch up -his tail curls up highly, as if he was pride and brave-
Brownie: ok love -she giggles softly as she lays down- Im going to take a nap and i want you to play with your siblings.
As brownie falls into a deep nap, flicker runs to his siblings, as he gets closer his older sibling looks at him as he was coming. His name was Brutis, he was the biggest pup from his sisters and brothers. he gots 2 sisters and 2 more brothers. Second born was named Mily, Third born was named Kyle, Forth born was named Kevin and the Fifth born was named Sky. Flicker was born last witch made his siblings think that they were better cuz they were more bigger. Brutis saw Flicker standing there
Flicker: hey guys can I join -wiggles his tail happily
Brutis: -he looks at his sisters and brothers smirking while he looks back at flicker- can you? aren't you a bit small to play with us.
the siblings laugh at poor flicker as they walk away, turns run down his cheeks as he lays down on the floor dosing off. Few hours past as his mom calls her kids
Brownie: BRUTIS, MILY, KYLE, KEVIN, SKY and FLICKER my lovely pups come here -she yelled while standing out side in front of the doggy door as there was a fance that looked like a cage.
the pups came running fast as they can, as flicker was always last to come through the door way as he jumps and trys to go through the door way. But his mom pop her head and pulled flicker out and sets him down beside his siblings
Brownie: today is a hard day for me, but you guys are growing strong and getting big. So its time to let other humans pick you to be with them -she said sadly- im going to miss you all deeply
as the owner to brownie and the pups came outside to put them in the caged fence, brownie had sorrow eyes as some farmer human started to drive in, she looks at the pups as she watchs the farmer pet her pups in the cage as the farmer pets brownie
Farmer: -pets brownies head- there there, I will bring them for a visit sometime
Brownie barked happy as she wiggled her tail trusting the farmers word, she watches him pick up flick, looking at him as he pets him.
Farmer: A bit small, cant have small pup in my farm to do guarding. -pets flicker as he looks at flicker as flickers ears were totally down with sad eyes- sorry -pulling his dog tag reading his name- Flicker. -he puts him back in the fenced cage, as he takes all the siblings, giving the owner money for the pups as he goes in his truck with the pups-
brownie looks at flicker as she rest her head on the grass beside the fenced cage, looking at flicker sadly, the owner sits on the step as people come and go saying he was to small. The day was turning dark and it was now 11pm. The owner sign little as brownie looked at his owner with sad eyes.
Owner: Guess were going to keep flicker. -the owner said to brownie-
Brownie bark happy as she was excited to keep at least one of her pups, she twirls in circle as she looks at the owner. Owner scratches her back as he bends to get flicker. Flicker looked sad that he couldn't get his own owner, flicker was very upset that no one wanted him cuz he was so small. The owner went inside with flicker and with brownie. 3 years as past as season change to summer to fall to winter to spring 3 times over as it was summer. Flicker jump down the huge hill from the back yard as he was huge and his mother was watching him from a distance, he ran tree to tree. Racing his speed and keeping in shape, Cuz he wanted to be stronger then ever, The owner came outside with a bowl of water as flicker heard the sound of his bowl being placed down from a distance, He set back as his owner had a time clock. His owner pressed it while making a sign with his hand flicker ran as fast as he can, Feeling the wind in his fast as he keeps his head low, while his paws move fast in front of him, his tail was sharp from behind him. Keeping balance with the grass, he climbed the steps as he stops at the owner as Flicker pants while the owner takes off the timer.
Owner: 39 seconds, Not bad flicker. Your getting better each time, You did 2 seconds more faster then last time. -owner smiled-
flicker was happy as he was being prised by his owner, wiggling his tail as he jumps up and down at his owner leaving his paws on his owners legs while he jumps. the owner pets his head and went inside, flicker walks up to the bowl while drinking the water, his ears perked up as he hears next door dog barking as flicker's mom brownie goes towards the barking while flicker follows his mother. Brownie walks up to the fence the surrounds the yard as the next door neighbor's dog skip was there, Hes short dog that shakes all the time. Skip was brownie friend from way back when she was a pup.
Brownie: Hey Skip whats going on? -sounding curiously-
Skip: -shaking nervously- have you heard about the bandit dogs?
Brownie: -tilts her head- no.. why?
Skip: -Skip goes closer to the fence, whispering- they been stealing around peoples farm and killing chickens -he shutters- theres been dog catchers all in the farm and alot in this area...
Flicker: -perks one ear up while the other drips down- do you know there names?
Skip: -shakes more scarily- no.. -skip looks more around as he runs inside more nervously-
Flicker had a dumb face on while brownie shakes her head
Flicker: is he always this way?
Brownie: no, he just is different. Everyone is unique and everyone is perfect in there own ways love, but we got to be extra guarded tonight. -she turns to walk in the house- Come lets go inside.
Flicker nods, wondering about the bandits and who they are, Maybe he thought maybe he was meant to be a wild dog but he doesn't want to disappoint his mother or his owner but he keep this in his mind. night fall came..
Flicker: MOM -he yelled while being in the front door- im going out for a run, need to stretch my legs.
Brownie: OK -she replayed loudly back-
Flicker went out side as he owner back in thought, walking around the yard as he goes up the hill, something catches his eyes as he saw eyes in the bushes, his ears perked while he watch them blink then what skip said went through his mind "bandit dogs" the bushes rifle as it was only birds trying to sleep but flew away, Flicker sign in a little bit of disappointment as a voice came from behind him.
Unknown: Thought it was us?
Flicker looked back as he saw 4 dogs and they were all black but one was white and black and one had flop ear, as he turns his body around. the one that spoke had the flop ear, looking at him for a while then spoke..
Flicker: Are you the bandit dogs? -nervously he asked but not scared from the question.-
Bandit1: Yes we are -he said it in a deep tone as if he was growling angry- and who might you be? a police dog?
Flicker: -shakes his head- NO -he said loudly as he stands proudly like a warrior- I am not scared, This is my yard and my territory. No outsiders enter my grounds while im here.
bandits laugh at his brave move thinking its funny.
Bandit1: My name is Cortez -saying it as a bad ass way- This here are Spike -turning his head at the blank one with yellow eyes- Otis -looking at the other black one with yellow and green- and this one is Bruce -looking at the one that is white and black with blue eyes, as Cortez turns around looking at flicker-
Flicker: my name is Flicker -standing the same way-
Cortez: -smirks- you got guts kid -as he thought of something- why don't you join us, You will fit so well. Being owned is so boring with there stupid rules and lock up in cages, where not pets were meant to be wild. Thats why were animals and not humans, think of it this way. They have kids so they shelter them until there an adults, then they move out. But for dogs, we cant go anywhere. what do you say?
Flicker: -started to think a bit as he shakes his head- can i join for one night?
Bruce: -snorts- what are we a trail for you to try, we are like family here -he smiles evilly- we take care of each other and do what we want when we want.
Otis: -Cuts Bruce from talking- Cortez lets just go, Where wasting our time here.
Spike just walks around sniffing the area making sure no one was watching.
Cortez: fellas fellas, He hasn't been wild yet. We all where once like this but me, now we will give you a trail -looking at flicker- what you say? join us for tonight?
Flicker:.....
To Be Continued..
Tell me what you think?
What you expect?
What would you do next?
I will continued but i need feed back on what i have here
